Writing - Recount

 A fishing experience

 

Instructions: 

Maori designs are influenced by being in the water, but especially from fishing.  Check out Piper’s fishing experience with her owner Mr J.  

Challenge: Decide which character you will.  Retell the story about the fishing expedition.

Gold: 4-5 paragraphs (daily entries)

Silver: 3-4 paragraphs (daily entries)

Bronze: 2-3 paragraphs (daily entries) 

Planning:

Title:	Fishing
Orientation: Who? When? Where? What?  Why?	stella(dog) June(owner) beach fishing to eat fish for dinner
Sequence of Events: Beginning Middle End	They catch a giant fish  They start fishing  Something starts pulling on the rod  They eat there fish for dinner
Conclusion	There happy they caught a fish
Vocabulary:	They fishing stella june

Start writing=>

On a late night june and her dog Stella went fishing. First june put on the fish bait and swung her fishing rod into the sea and waited for a pull. 30 minutes later finally june’s fishing rod started pulling. 

Stella june’s dog started to bark.JUne pulled for 3 minutes straight and then finally pulled verry hard and got  a  red snapper.Then they both went home and ate the red snapper